{"id":2352,"date":"2010-08-27T10:00:45","date_gmt":"2010-08-27T08:00:45","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/?p=2352"},"modified":"2010-08-27T10:00:57","modified_gmt":"2010-08-27T08:00:57","slug":"grandes-expectativas","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/2010\/08\/27\/grandes-expectativas\/","title":{"rendered":"Great expectations"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve mentioned <a title=\"ScriptShadow\" href=\"http:\/\/scriptshadow.blogspot.com\/2010\/08\/vanishing-on-7th-street.html\" target=\"_blank\">Scriptshadow<\/a> in <a href=\"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/2010\/08\/02\/en-las-montanas-de-la-locura\/\">the past<\/a>, so I won&#8217;t introduce Carson Reeves again. Last Monday he reviewed the script for <em>Vanishing On 7th Street<\/em>, a horror film whose trailer is already available:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><object classid=\"clsid:d27cdb6e-ae6d-11cf-96b8-444553540000\" width=\"640\" height=\"385\" codebase=\"http:\/\/download.macromedia.com\/pub\/shockwave\/cabs\/flash\/swflash.cab#version=6,0,40,0\"><param name=\"allowFullScreen\" value=\"true\" \/><param name=\"allowscriptaccess\" value=\"always\" \/><param name=\"src\" value=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/v\/syT_iufL128?fs=1&amp;hl=es_ES&amp;rel=0&amp;color1=0x5d1719&amp;color2=0xcd311b&amp;hd=1\" \/><param name=\"allowfullscreen\" value=\"true\" \/><embed type=\"application\/x-shockwave-flash\" width=\"640\" height=\"385\" src=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/v\/syT_iufL128?fs=1&amp;hl=es_ES&amp;rel=0&amp;color1=0x5d1719&amp;color2=0xcd311b&amp;hd=1\" allowscriptaccess=\"always\" allowfullscreen=\"true\"><\/embed><\/object><\/p>\n<p>As you can see, everybody disappears form the face of the earth, with the rare exception of our protagonists. There&#8217;s also something strange going on with darkness, as they can only trust the lights they carry themselves. Pure claustrophoby, and a powerful premise.<\/p>\n<p>Carson starts off his review by wondering, too powerful?<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><em>The Vanishing on 7th Street<\/em> is a script that starts off strong but, like  a lot of these scripts, gets swallowed up in its own ambition.  The  ultra high-concept premise lures us in like fresh garbage to a family of  raccoons.  The question is, is the premise *too* high concept?  Wha?  Huh? Buh?  \u2018How can that even be possible\u2019 you ask??   A premise is too  high concept when no matter what you do with the story, it will never be  as interesting as the concept itself.  In other words, you bite off  more than you can chew.  And unfortunately, I think that\u2019s the case with  <em>Vanishing<\/em>.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>The idea deserves some thought. Only last night was I talking precisely about this, as I&#8217;ve recently finished <em>1984<\/em> and my partner is reading <em>Brave New World<\/em>. Such classics both suffer from the same unarguable flaw: once the initial premise is exhausted, the plot grows thinner by the page.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a title=\"1984\" href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.co.uk\/gp\/product\/0141036141?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=talleliter-21&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1634&amp;creative=19450&amp;creativeASIN=0141036141\" target=\"_blank\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-2390\" title=\"1984eng\" src=\"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/images\/1984eng.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"113\" height=\"183\" \/><\/a> <a title=\"Brave New World\" href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.co.uk\/gp\/product\/0099518473?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=talleliter-21&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1634&amp;creative=19450&amp;creativeASIN=0099518473\" target=\"_blank\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-2391\" title=\"Brave New World\" src=\"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/images\/BraveNewWorld.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"124\" height=\"183\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>We&#8217;ve seeen the same problem on TV, a few years ago on <em>The 4400<\/em> (forty four hundred missing people reappear simultaneously together without aging a day or memories of the missing time) and more recently on the big flop of the season, <em>Flashforward<\/em> (every person on the planet faints simultaneously and dreams a scene of their own future exactly six months later).<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a title=\"The 4400 complete collection\" href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.co.uk\/gp\/product\/B001COCOB6?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=talleliter-21&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1634&amp;creative=19450&amp;creativeASIN=B001COCOB6\" target=\"_blank\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-2389\" title=\"The 4400 Complete Collection\" src=\"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/images\/4400complete.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"136\" height=\"183\" \/><\/a> <a title=\"Flashforward (UK DVD)\" href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.co.uk\/gp\/product\/B002R59WN2?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=talleliter-21&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1634&amp;creative=19450&amp;creativeASIN=B002R59WN2\" target=\"_blank\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" title=\"Flashforward\" src=\"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/images\/Flashforward2.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"131\" height=\"183\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Of course the concepts are powerful enough to engage the reader&#8217;s imagination (or the viewer&#8217;s, who&#8217;ll pay their cinema ticket or sit in front of the TV every week, willing to witness the grand show) &#8211; but is it not a pity that, by starting with the climax, we all end up disappointed?<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p>If the concept that sends your  story into motion   is the best thing about your script, then you only  have one-fourth of  a  script.  What if aliens invaded our planet  tomorrow?  Okay, great   concept.  But then what?  How do you keep that  interesting for the 100   minutes after they invade?  If you want to see  how bad someone can   screw this up, go rent Independence Day.  Just make  sure to also rent a   gun, as you\u2019ll want to shoot yourself by the  midpoint.  I think the   key to these high concept ideas is making sure  you have a story ready   on the personal level after you hit your audience  with the hook.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>Indeed the big question is, how do I avoid that problem? With interesting characters? Through solid plotting? But of course! Shouldn&#8217;t those elements be present in every story? Yes, but we raised the bar too high for ourselves, how can I come up with an ending that&#8217;s worthy of my beginning? Well, you need to find elements that are just as powerful. <em>Lost<\/em> may have disappointed many of us towards the end, but during six seasons it managed to reinvent itself with complex characters, unexpected twists and narrative schemes of all colours and shapes. <em>Blindness<\/em> turned itself inside out by undoing a world tragedy and revealing a personal one. Masterful!<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a title=\"Lost season 6\" href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.co.uk\/gp\/product\/B002SNA5HA?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=talleliter-21&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1634&amp;creative=19450&amp;creativeASIN=B002SNA5HA\" target=\"_blank\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" title=\"Lost temporada 6\" src=\"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/images\/Losttemporada6.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"133\" height=\"183\" \/><\/a> <a title=\"Blindness\" href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.co.uk\/gp\/product\/B001PTHW9C?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=talleliter-21&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1634&amp;creative=19450&amp;creativeASIN=B001PTHW9C\" target=\"_blank\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-2388\" title=\"Blindness\" src=\"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/images\/Blindness_eng.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"130\" height=\"183\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>So here&#8217;s an exercise just as powerful: how would you save <em>Vanishing on 7th Street<\/em> from falling into this trap? How would you improve a book the size and importance of <em>1984<\/em>? How would you get, out of these premises above, more than the authors who created them? Or, to present another forthcoming  blockbuster, what would you do with the premise of <a title=\"Skyline\" href=\"http:\/\/www.iamrogue.com\/skyline\" target=\"_blank\"><em>Skyline<\/em><\/a>?<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><object classid=\"clsid:d27cdb6e-ae6d-11cf-96b8-444553540000\" width=\"640\" height=\"385\" codebase=\"http:\/\/download.macromedia.com\/pub\/shockwave\/cabs\/flash\/swflash.cab#version=6,0,40,0\"><param name=\"allowFullScreen\" value=\"true\" \/><param name=\"allowscriptaccess\" value=\"always\" \/><param name=\"src\" value=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/v\/BGLaAQxwnz8?fs=1&amp;hl=es_ES&amp;rel=0&amp;color1=0x5d1719&amp;color2=0xcd311b&amp;hd=1\" \/><param name=\"allowfullscreen\" value=\"true\" \/><embed type=\"application\/x-shockwave-flash\" width=\"640\" height=\"385\" src=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/v\/BGLaAQxwnz8?fs=1&amp;hl=es_ES&amp;rel=0&amp;color1=0x5d1719&amp;color2=0xcd311b&amp;hd=1\" allowscriptaccess=\"always\" allowfullscreen=\"true\"><\/embed><\/object><\/p>\n<p><\/p>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;ve mentioned Scriptshadow in the past, so I won&#8217;t introduce Carson Reeves again. Last Monday he reviewed the script for Vanishing On 7th Street, a horror film whose trailer is already available: As you can see, everybody disappears form the face of the earth, with the rare exception of our protagonists. There&#8217;s also something strange [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"om_disable_all_campaigns":false,"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"ngg_post_thumbnail":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[32],"tags":[68,44,103,53],"class_list":["post-2352","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-taller-literario","tag-ejercicio","tag-guion","tag-narrativa","tag-recomendacion"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2352","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2352"}],"version-history":[{"count":13,"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2352\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2394,"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2352\/revisions\/2394"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2352"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2352"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alexhernandez.es\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2352"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}